MikeStan Posted October 11, 2011 Share Posted October 11, 2011 My washer is brokeDamn the rising waters!Call pro I will 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skintdigit Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 What, did the congressional super-committee axe haiku before they failed to accomplish anything constructive? Here's one to get the ball rolling.Do-it-yourself'ers:Learning curve can be shallow,How much is time worth?SD 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skintdigit Posted December 10, 2011 Share Posted December 10, 2011 No bites? OK, here's another:Oven lies heat-less,Parts strewn about the kitchen. Hero makes it work.A chef with no stove, Fast food and cold-cuts, he eats.Then fix-it-now helps.Cold Shiner KosmosSweats calmly on the coaster.A day's work is done.(Shiner Brewery is in Shiner, Texas)Good day to all,SD 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kdog Posted December 10, 2011 Share Posted December 10, 2011 No bites?Hahahahaha - I don't get it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
appl.tech.29501 Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 oven spews its partschef rejected like wife scornedDIY hand romance 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DurhamAppliance Posted December 11, 2011 Share Posted December 11, 2011 (edited) These are really good. I'm too wordy to be good at haiku....it's actually a higher form of art than a standard free verse poem (Robert Frost says "writing free verse is like playing tennis without a net") not only do haiku's have a rigid structure but you have fewer words to convey your meaning. Much like a short story is a higher form of art than a novel. You see, I use too many words to say even the most simplest of things and i go on and on just to say the same thing over and over again as I am too wordy to say it in just a few words what you guys can say in a simple haiku although it is really a complex thing even though it is using just a few words which I am not really good at doing since I say the simplest things over and over again , you understand what i mean? Edited December 12, 2011 by DurhamAppliance 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skintdigit Posted December 13, 2011 Share Posted December 13, 2011 Verbal founts spring forth,Inundate the intellect.Concise is sublime. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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